Dave Eggers and 826 Valencia
In 2002, Dave Eggers (the writer) set up a pirate supply store. And that’s why, on Monday, I spent an evening writing a story about a fish called Bob, who was distressed by the colour of his tail.
826 Valencia was Eggers’ stab at creating a literacy program for kids. As you can imagine, from the mind of the man who wrote A Heartbreaking Work of Staggering Genius, this was never going to be a normal after-school homework club.
The idea (once you’ve got past the pirate supply store frontage) is that kids come to 826 for story-writing workshops, mentoring, cartooning, ‘zine creation, homeworking, poeming – anything really. And the idea has been wildly successful. As a result, six other chapters opened up in the States. But, now, most excitingly, London has its very own: The Ministry of Stories.
The Ministry of Stories
As soon as I heard about it, I cancelled any plans I had for emigrating to the US to join Dave, and instead I emailed the Chief Minister at The Ministry of Stories. To my delight, he invited me for a training session, which is where I found myself on Monday night, pretending to be an eight year-old, writing a story about Bob the fish with the blue stripe on his tail.
My kind of (volunteer) job!
The Ministry of Stories was set up in November 2010. They take about three field-trips a week from local (and not so local) schools and also have two one-to-one mentoring sessions a week to help young writers (8-18) work on their stories.
Plus you can buy the finest human snot at the monster supply store, while you’re there.
Minister in Training
So, hot-tail, hip-top excited, along I went, down Hoxton way, to meet Ben and Anne, two of the Chief Minister’s aides, for an evening’s hard training.
To start off, we pretended to be eight year-olds and wrote a story together.
- First we made a list of things that go into a story. Things like villains and danger and feelings, but also words and punctuation.
- Then we had to decide who we wanted our main character to be. We shouted a few things and then had an anonymous (and blind) vote. By democratic decision, it would be Bob the fish with the blue stripe on his tail.
- Then we did the same thing for a second character: Archimedes, Bob’s hairdresser.
- Then we chose Bob’s dream in the same way: to wear jumpers; and Bob’s greatest fear: that he would turn completely blue.
- Finally, we chose a location for the story: a pub.
Then, together, we wrote the first page and a bit, trying to build up to a cliff-hanger. The gist of the story was that Bob really wanted a jumper to cover up his embarrassing blue tail. Archimedes offered to make him one (out of Bob’s hair) – but it would cost him. The problem was that Bob didn’t have any money. So Archimedes suggested that Bob go and ask the elephant in the room for a job. And that’s where we had our cliff-hanger: “But isn’t he…?”
At this point we all split up into mentors and writers and we finished the story on our own, with the help of the mentors. Frighteningly good fun.
The Fish’s Arms
Here, for your edification, is my (unedited) story. See if you can spot the logical inconsistencies; editing is a wonderful thing…
“But isn’t he…?”
Archimedes stopped cutting Bob’s hair and touched him on the shoulder. “Listen. Finish your pint and just go over to him. I’m sure he’s not as mean as the stories say.”
Bob gulped and looked over at the elephant from the corner of his goggles. The stories were horrible.
Archimedes reached over and took the pint from Bob’s fin. “Go on.”
Bob vomited a little bit in his mouth. “But they say his trunk can strangle a shark!” Bob said in a small voice.
“That’s true,” Archimedes said. “I’ve seen him do it.”
Then he saw Bob retch again. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to scare you.”
Bob shivered and watched the muscles in the elephant’s back as he sucked up an entire gallon of brine. “I can’t do it!”
Archimedes shook his head at his old friend, picked up his scissors and said, nonchalantly, “Your tail’s looking very blue today…”
Suddenly, Bob shot out of his chair, spilling the rest of his whelk juice all over the elephant’s foot.
There was a rumble and the whole pub started to shake. Bob quivered and whimpered as the big fat elephant turned slowly around and bellowed in Bob’s face. “You! Blue-buttocks! Are you looking for a snorting?”
Bob could hardly move for his quivering and shook his head scarcely. There was a tinkle as the scissors fell from Archimedes’ hand and Bob felt his friend creep away…
Chapter Two to follow!
And so I signed the Ministry contract:
Huzzah! Can’t wait to get my first ministry appointment.
You can watch Dave talk about 826 Valencia – and the network of similar ventures it has spawned – here: